A Song of Alliterations

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Altruism of the angels,

Beauty of a bouquet, born of the choicest flowers from the Garden of Eden,

Cascade of celestial charm,

Dear darling Mother,

This is me, your labour of love.

Your love-raptured lullabies,

I hear from this dark dome of your weary womb.

Your loving lap,

Awaits patiently, the warmth of my feeble feet.

I swim soberly in endless nothingness,

Waiting to be held in your hallowed hands,

As you pour over me, the lasting love of a countless centuries.

Dear darling mother,

Will I ever be able to repay, the debts of the petulant pain I’ve put you through?

73 thoughts on “A Song of Alliterations

  1. Dear Sam.
    Happy New Year, dear one. How lovely to read you again.

    My prayer that your year end was hassle free prevails: May the new year follow suit.
    This is a beaUtiful, beaUtiful poem. πŸ’• πŸ™Œ

    As a mother I’d remind you that one becomes a mother the day the baby is born. 😲
    Yes, a mother is born on the very same day! πŸ’—
    And so, that unconditional love you feel coming from your mother is the same love that reflects back to her from you. A perfect design! Nothing compares.
    See, both parties win here. Isn’t life grand?! Oh yes, it is!!!!

    That you have a strong desire to give back is precious.
    Give this to your lovely, dear darling mother. See what she says.
    But by you putting your whole heart into writing this, I feel you’re paying homage to all mother (and that includes me πŸ₯°) So, thank you, my sweet. I bless you. A most lovely song of alliteration poem: best one I’ve read this year. πŸ‘ πŸ’•
    Happy New Year πŸ₯³ πŸͺ… ❀️

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    • You never fail to delight me with your wonderful words. Thank you so so so very much, dearest PP! You’ve made my day, just as you always do with your precious words. You’ve made motherhood seem very beautiful and precious. 😍 You reflect so much love and kindness, and now I know where it comes from. Nothing compares indeed. Thanks a lot for your fantastic comment, I can’t stop reading it. Wishing you a fabulous, delightful, Excellent 2022! Looking forward to correspond with you more this year 😍 Have a great year and thank you once again πŸ™


  2. Oh, Sam, how beautiful. I envy you of having such a wonderful mother. It’s a special bond between a good mother and her daughter. I have a friend who has such a bond with her mother and I try to go visit her as often as possible, not just to see her, but rather to see her mom.

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    • Oh that is so sweet! This is not actually dedicated to my mother, but to mothers in general, from the perspective of an unborn foetus. Thanks for your kind comment. πŸ™πŸ’–


  3. Just wow!!!!!! ❣️❣️❣️ This made me too emotional. Oh dear Sam, thanks for this lovely poem. I love every single word. 😍😍😍 Happy New Year my dear Sister. ✨✨

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    • Thank you so so very much! πŸ˜€ Delighted to hear from you. I’m guessing U’re the first to get it exactly as I meant it. Thanks again! πŸ™πŸ˜Š (Sorry, been a bit busy lately. Have lots to catch up on in WP. Will visit you sooon πŸ˜€).

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