
Altruism of the angels,
Beauty of a bouquet, born of the choicest flowers from the Garden of Eden,
Cascade of celestial charm,
Dear darling Mother,
This is me, your labour of love.
Your love-raptured lullabies,
I hear from this dark dome of your weary womb.
Your loving lap,
Awaits patiently, the warmth of my feeble feet.
I swim soberly in endless nothingness,
Waiting to be held in your hallowed hands,
As you pour over me, the lasting love of a countless centuries.
Dear darling mother,
Will I ever be able to repay, the debts of the petulant pain I’ve put you through?
Thank you, Sam, for this beautiful expression of love for your mother!
Joanna
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Thank you so so very much, Joanna, for your constant support and kind words of encouragement 🙏 Thanks a lot.
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This is q lovely piece for your lovely mother. Thank you dear for this ❤
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Thank you, my dear friend!
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You’re welcome 😊
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Dear Sam.
Happy New Year, dear one. How lovely to read you again.
My prayer that your year end was hassle free prevails: May the new year follow suit.
This is a beaUtiful, beaUtiful poem. 💕 🙌
As a mother I’d remind you that one becomes a mother the day the baby is born. 😲
Yes, a mother is born on the very same day! 💗
And so, that unconditional love you feel coming from your mother is the same love that reflects back to her from you. A perfect design! Nothing compares.
See, both parties win here. Isn’t life grand?! Oh yes, it is!!!!
That you have a strong desire to give back is precious.
Give this to your lovely, dear darling mother. See what she says.
But by you putting your whole heart into writing this, I feel you’re paying homage to all mother (and that includes me 🥰) So, thank you, my sweet. I bless you. A most lovely song of alliteration poem: best one I’ve read this year. 👏 💕
Happy New Year 🥳 🪅 ❤️
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You never fail to delight me with your wonderful words. Thank you so so so very much, dearest PP! You’ve made my day, just as you always do with your precious words. You’ve made motherhood seem very beautiful and precious. 😍 You reflect so much love and kindness, and now I know where it comes from. Nothing compares indeed. Thanks a lot for your fantastic comment, I can’t stop reading it. Wishing you a fabulous, delightful, Excellent 2022! Looking forward to correspond with you more this year 😍 Have a great year and thank you once again 🙏
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Such a moving poem Sam. Only today I was saying to a friend of mine that we can never pay back what our parents did for us. We can only pay it forward.
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Thank you so very much! 🙏 Wow, I love the serendipity there. 😀
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You’re welcome! Yes, sometimes things work together!
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An alluring alcolade to your mum. Well done, Sam. 😉
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Thank you so very much! 😀 Not to my own mom, actually, just something I fancied to write 😅
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You alliterated above average. 😉
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Ah! 😂 Ur wordplays are always something out of the ordinary 💝
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What wonderful loving words for your Mother. Inspirational. 💐🌹🙋♂️
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Thank you!
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Thanks a lot 😊🙏
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Such a lovely poem dear Sam, it is overwhelming to read. 💖
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Thank you so much! 😀🙏
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You’re most welcome! 😊❤️
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I love this so much! That’s just how I feel about my mother!
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Took the words straight out of my mouth. I love this so much🌹
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Thank you so much! 😻
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No problem🌹
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Thank you so much! 😍
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Lovely poem Sam! And ah, those alliterating phrases- I love alliteration!
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Thank you so much! 😍 Same, big fan of alliterations!
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Oh, Sam, how beautiful. I envy you of having such a wonderful mother. It’s a special bond between a good mother and her daughter. I have a friend who has such a bond with her mother and I try to go visit her as often as possible, not just to see her, but rather to see her mom.
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Oh that is so sweet! This is not actually dedicated to my mother, but to mothers in general, from the perspective of an unborn foetus. Thanks for your kind comment. 🙏💖
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Very well done, Sam. Yet another astounding literary piece that gives me something to ponder in the early hours when the rest of the world is asleep. Excellent work.
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Thank you so so very much, sir! Your comments are truly very warm and encouraging. Means a lot to me, coming from you 🙏
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My pleasure.
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Just wow!!!!!! ❣️❣️❣️ This made me too emotional. Oh dear Sam, thanks for this lovely poem. I love every single word. 😍😍😍 Happy New Year my dear Sister. ✨✨
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Thank you so so very much, Akka! I’m delighted to hear your response to this 😍 Wishing you a fabulous, memorable new year 2022!
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Such a sweet post. I love all the arrangements of metaphors used. It’s brilliant.
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Thank you so so very much! 🤩 Very kind of you tk say so. Thanks a lot 🙏
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I love, love alliteration! This is such a beautiful piece ❤️
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Thank you so so very much, my friend! 😀💖
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Wow Sam. This is just gorgeous~! 💖💖
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Thanks a lot! 😀 Msans so much to me. Thank you!
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You’re so welcome Sam! 💖
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This is a masterpiece Sam🥰🥺
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Thank you so very much, my friend! 💖
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That was so very sweet. We have been learning all these figures of speech in class ninth, and alliteration is one of them!
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Thank you so much, young man! Alliterations are super cool to use in poetry, which is why I have them even in my blog name 😄 Thanks again!
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Many mothers must feel fully repaid. Love all the alliteration!
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Thank you so so very much! 😀🙏
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That was so beautifully penned!😍❤
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Thank you so very much, my friend! 🙏💝
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So true!!!
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🙏🙏
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This is such a beautiful, heartfelt and lovely note to your mother. The role parents play in our lives is truly invaluable.
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Indeed so, my friend. Thank you so very much! 🙏
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So beautifully written 👏👏
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Thank you so much! 💖
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This is such a exquisite piece! So heartfelt and true. Also, love the use of alliterations 😀❤
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Thank you so so very much, my friend! 😀💖🙏
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Means a lot. Thanks again, buddy! 💖🙏
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I love what you did with this one Sam. And your voice of the unborn child is very creative!
dwight
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Thank you so so very much! 😀 Delighted to hear from you. I’m guessing U’re the first to get it exactly as I meant it. Thanks again! 🙏😊 (Sorry, been a bit busy lately. Have lots to catch up on in WP. Will visit you sooon 😀).
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You are welcome! No worries… just stop by once in a while and I will be happy. Keep up the good work!
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Well written✍🏻👌🏻👍🏻
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What a gorgeous, heartfelt write, my dear! ❤️
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Thank you so so very much! 😍🙏💖
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My pleasure always. 😊
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A beautiful tribute to your mother, Sam. It’s a lovely poem. 🌻✨💛
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Thank you so so very much, my friend! ☺️💖 Truly appreciated. Thank you!
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You’re most welcome, Sam. Always my pleasure. ❤️☺️
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This is really beautiful. The language is just so lovely
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Thank you sooo very much! 😍💖
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